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JOHN CABOT UNIVERSITY

COURSE CODE: "JRN 399"
COURSE NAME: "Special Topics: Opinion Writing"
SEMESTER & YEAR: Spring Semester 2012
SYLLABUS

INSTRUCTOR: Bachrach Judy
HOURS: TTH 16:00-17:15
TOTAL NO. OF CONTACT HOURS: 45
CREDITS: 3
PREREQUISITES: Prerequisite: EN 110 with a grade of C or above; Recommended: DJRN 221
OFFICE HOURS: Tuesday and Thursday

COURSE DESCRIPTION:

An opinion piece is everything solid journalism requires from any other form of reporting: good investigative skills, sharp judgment, a firm, eloquent writing style, a clear presentation of hard, grounded facts, and excellent grammar.  It is, however, different from classical journalism in 3 important ways.

First, opinion pieces can take all sorts of forms: political stances; restaurant-theater-book- music or TV reviews, critiques (pro and con) of medical, governmental or financial systems.  These are often called OP-ED articles, because in print journalism they are generally presented on the page opposite those editorials that reflect the views of the publisher (who is usually conservative!).

 Secondly, opinion articles are short. Maybe 500 to 750 words. They therefore have to be expressions of quiet lucidity. The writer must get to the point pretty damn quickly. And damn clearly. There’s just no room to dither.

SUMMARY OF COURSE CONTENT:
We are going to begin with traditional media: writing sharp-edged political opinions and film-music-book-restaurant reviews for print. The political issues on which you will be asked to express your views will depend very much, as journalism always does, on the crises of the hour: thus, on certain days students will all be opining, each in his own particular way, on the very same issue. The reviews, on the other hand, will be up to you, the individual student, to select: but the professor’s consent must be obtained beforehand on whatever it is the student wishes to critique. 

    Always remember that the reader of magazines and newspapers is likely to be in a slightly more patient frame of mind than those who call up information on the Web. That’s why print op-ed pieces and film or book reviews may be longer than those you see on the Internet. Sentences can ramble on for just a little bit in print, adjectives are welcome. Commas and semi-colons are perfectly fine because the eye does like to dance around a printed page, as long as it has a fair chance of eventually being rewarded with a period. Or a new paragraph.

     These opinion pieces will be read out loud in class – and often edited, first by me, the professor, and then, as time goes on, by your peers. Thus, you will all learn not only how to be fine writers but good editors: supervisors who will learn how to tell when there’s a hole (as we say in journalism) in the story, an absence of back-up, a void.

Part 2: The second leg of the course will be writing similar reviews and political commentary for the Internet: blogging smart, in other words – a sorely needed addition to the Web these days.  The Internet user, even the one who calls up the New York Times every morning, has less patience, and wants news and views to be compact and full of impact, often enlivened with photos or better still, video footage. Writing here is still primary, however. And writing style is even more important here than in print: if you’re witty, charming, profound, mean-spirited, and brilliant – you’ll get a lot of people following you on the Web.

 

  Part 3: The last chapter of our course will be opinion writing for television and radio, a wholly different discipline from either of the others, and one that demands a whole new set of skills. Among them: brevity, simple, clear sentences, words of two syllables (at the outside), and complete subordination of copy to visuals. I spent 6 years on television, both writing and delivering film reviews on air 3 days a week and I can tell you that there’s nothing more annoying to anyone sitting in front of a camera than stumbling over long words or sentences with complicated subordinate clauses. It takes time to get used to this discipline, one that allows the speaker to “punch her copy” (as they say in the business), but eventually anyone can learn how to do it.

    Students will be asked to deliver TV-style political opinion pieces and film-book-music reviews to the rest of the class: this exercise will involve not only cogent writing, but also a clear delivery: punching up certain words, and modulating the delivery of others, depending on what portion of the copy you wish to emphasize..

LEARNING OUTCOMES:


    This is a class that tells you, the writer, how to marshal those thoughts, those facts and come quickly to a clear and beautifully expressed opinion – one that might very well end up swaying the views of a lot of readers or viewers or listeners you don’t know and will likely never meet. (The highest compliment for any journalist!)  It will also teach you how to write – in a range of ways that differ markedly – for a wide assortment of media: the kind that is absorbed by the eye, as well as the kind that is interpreted by the ear.



   Yes, you can be smart on TV using words of 2 syllables, and you can be dazzling while invoking simple sentences. In fact, on television and on radio, simplicity is the only way of dazzling an audience – and simplicity, curiously enough, is the most difficult of all lessons to learn. 

    And finally, but extremely important, I will expect you all to write and email me – twice weekly – a journal of thoughts and opinions: on anything at all. It can be as little as 4 sentences or as long as you like, but writing is a muscle: the more you flex it, the better it gets!

TEXTBOOK:
Book TitleAuthorPublisherISBN numberLibrary Call NumberCommentsFormatLocal BookstoreOnline Purchase
Writing and Reporting News: A Coaching Method Carol Rich 9780495004233 9780495004233     
REQUIRED RESERVED READING:
NONE

RECOMMENDED RESERVED READING:
NONE
GRADING POLICY
-ASSESSMENT METHODS:
AssignmentGuidelinesWeight
ASSIGNMENTS (note the "s): movie reviews, book reviews, political reviews etc<p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: times new roman; font-size: 12pt;">Part 1: We are going to begin with traditional media: writing sharp-edged political opinions and film-music-book-restaurant reviews for print. The political issues on which you will be asked to express your views will depend very much, as journalism always does, on the crises of the hour: thus, on certain days students will all be opining, each in his own particular way, on the very same issue. The reviews, on the other hand, will be up to you, the individual student, to select: but the professor&rsquo;s consent must be obtained beforehand on whatever it is the student wishes to critique.&nbsp; </span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: times new roman; font-size: 12pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Always remember that the reader of magazines and newspapers is likely to be in a slightly more patient frame of mind than those who call up information on the Web. That&rsquo;s why print op-ed pieces and film or book reviews may be longer than those you see on the Internet. Sentences can ramble on for just a little bit in print, adjectives are welcome. Commas and semi-colons are perfectly fine because the eye does like to dance around a printed page, as long as it has a fair chance of eventually being rewarded with a period. Or a new paragraph.</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: times new roman; font-size: 12pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; These opinion pieces will be read out loud in class &ndash; and often edited, first by me, the professor, and then, as time goes on, by your peers. Thus, you will all learn not only how to be fine writers but good editors: supervisors who will learn how to tell when there&rsquo;s a hole (as we say in journalism) in the story, an absence of back-up, a void.</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: times new roman; font-size: 12pt;">Part 2: The second leg of the course will be writing similar reviews and political commentary for the Internet: blogging smart, in other words &ndash; a sorely needed addition to the Web these days.&nbsp; The Internet user, even the one who calls up the New York Times every morning, has less patience, and wants news and views to be compact and full of impact, often enlivened with photos or better still, video footage. Writing here is still primary, however. And writing style is even more important here than in print: if you&rsquo;re witty, charming, profound, mean-spirited, and brilliant &ndash; you&rsquo;ll get a lot of people following you on the Web.</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: times new roman; font-size: 12pt;">&nbsp; Part 3: The last chapter of our course will be opinion writing for television and radio, a wholly different discipline from either of the others, and one that demands a whole new set of skills. Among them: brevity, simple, clear sentences, words of two syllables (at the outside), and complete subordination of copy to visuals. I spent 6 years on television, both writing and delivering film reviews on air 3 days a week and I can tell you that there&rsquo;s nothing more annoying to anyone sitting in front of a camera than stumbling over long words or sentences with complicated subordinate clauses. It takes time to get used to this discipline, one that allows the speaker to &ldquo;punch her copy&rdquo; (as they say in the business), but eventually anyone can learn how to do it. </span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: times new roman; font-size: 12pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Students will be asked to deliver TV-style political opinion pieces and film-book-music reviews to the rest of the class: this exercise will involve not only cogent writing, but also a clear delivery: punching up certain words, and modulating the delivery of others, depending on what portion of the copy you wish to emphasize..</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: times new roman; font-size: 12pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp; Yes, you can be smart on TV using words of 2 syllables, and you can be dazzling while invoking simple sentences. In fact, on television and on radio, simplicity is the only way of dazzling an audience &ndash; and simplicity, curiously enough, is the most difficult of all lessons to learn.&nbsp; </span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: times new roman; font-size: 12pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; And finally, but extremely important, I will expect you all to write and email me &ndash; twice weekly &ndash; a journal of thoughts and opinions: on anything at all. It can be as little as 4 sentences or as long as you like, but writing is a muscle: the more you flex it, the better it gets!</span></p>80 percent

-ASSESSMENT CRITERIA:

Assessment Guidelines for assigning main letter grades: A, B, C,D, and F.

A:  Work of this quality directly addresses the question or problem raised and provides a coherent argument displaying an extensiveknowledge of relevant information or content. This type of work demonstrates the ability to critically evaluate concepts and theory and has an element of novelty and originality. There is clear evidence of a significant amount of reading beyond that required for the course.

B:  This is highly competent level of performance and directly addresses the question or problem raised.

There is a demonstration of some ability to critically evaluatetheory and concepts and relate them to practice. Discussions reflect the student’s own arguments and are not simply a repetition of standard lecture andreference material. The work does not suffer from any major errors or omissions and provides evidence of reading beyond the required assignments.

C:  This is an acceptable level of performance and provides answers that are clear but limited, reflecting the information offered in the lectures and reference readings.

D:  This level of performances demonstrates that the student lacks a coherent grasp of the material.

Important information is omitted and irrelevant points included.In effect, the student has barely done enough to persuade the instructor that s/he should not fail.

F: This work fails to show any knowledge or understanding of the issues raised in the question. Most of the material in the answer is irrelevant.


-ATTENDANCE REQUIREMENTS:
Journalism is not only a deadline business but an attendance business. You simply won't be able to make deadlines (or at least write cogently, intelligently, and to the point on deadline) unless you show up for class. So show up. Absences excused only if you have a great excuse. Hand in assignments on time. Those are my two main rules.
ACADEMIC HONESTY
As stated in the university catalog, any student who commits an act of academic dishonesty will receive a failing grade on the work in which the dishonesty occurred. In addition, acts of academic dishonesty, irrespective of the weight of the assignment, may result in the student receiving a failing grade in the course. Instances of academic dishonesty will be reported to the Dean of Academic Affairs. A student who is reported twice for academic dishonesty is subject to summary dismissal from the University. In such a case, the Academic Council will then make a recommendation to the President, who will make the final decision.
STUDENTS WITH LEARNING OR OTHER DISABILITIES
John Cabot University does not discriminate on the basis of disability or handicap. Students with approved accommodations must inform their professors at the beginning of the term. Please see the website for the complete policy.

SCHEDULE

SUMMARY OF COURSE CONTENT:

Part 1: We are going to begin with traditional media: writing sharp-edged political opinions and film-music-book-restaurant reviews for print. The political issues on which you will be asked to express your views will depend very much, as journalism always does, on the crises of the hour: thus, on certain days students will all be opining, each in his own particular way, on the very same issue. The reviews, on the other hand, will be up to you, the individual student, to select: but the professor’s consent must be obtained beforehand on whatever it is the student wishes to critique. 

    Always remember that the reader of magazines and newspapers is likely to be in a slightly more patient frame of mind than those who call up information on the Web. That’s why print op-ed pieces and film or book reviews may be longer than those you see on the Internet. Sentences can ramble on for just a little bit in print, adjectives are welcome. Commas and semi-colons are perfectly fine because the eye does like to dance around a printed page, as long as it has a fair chance of eventually being rewarded with a period. Or a new paragraph.

     These opinion pieces will be read out loud in class – and often edited, first by me, the professor, and then, as time goes on, by your peers. Thus, you will all learn not only how to be fine writers but good editors: supervisors who will learn how to tell when there’s a hole (as we say in journalism) in the story, an absence of back-up, a void.

Part 2: The second leg of the course will be writing similar reviews and political commentary for the Internet: blogging smart, in other words – a sorely needed addition to the Web these days.  The Internet user, even the one who calls up the New York Times every morning, has less patience, and wants news and views to be compact and full of impact, often enlivened with photos or better still, video footage. Writing here is still primary, however. And writing style is even more important here than in print: if you’re witty, charming, profound, mean-spirited, and brilliant – you’ll get a lot of people following you on the Web.

 

  Part 3: The last chapter of our course will be opinion writing for television and radio, a wholly different discipline from either of the others, and one that demands a whole new set of skills. Among them: brevity, simple, clear sentences, words of two syllables (at the outside), and complete subordination of copy to visuals. I spent 6 years on television, both writing and delivering film reviews on air 3 days a week and I can tell you that there’s nothing more annoying to anyone sitting in front of a camera than stumbling over long words or sentences with complicated subordinate clauses. It takes time to get used to this discipline, one that allows the speaker to “punch her copy” (as they say in the business), but eventually anyone can learn how to do it.

    Students will be asked to deliver TV-style political opinion pieces and film-book-music reviews to the rest of the class: this exercise will involve not only cogent writing, but also a clear delivery: punching up certain words, and modulating the delivery of others, depending on what portion of the copy you wish to emphasize..

   Yes, you can be smart on TV using words of 2 syllables, and you can be dazzling while invoking simple sentences. In fact, on television and on radio, simplicity is the only way of dazzling an audience – and simplicity, curiously enough, is the most difficult of all lessons to learn. 

    And finally, but extremely important, I will expect you all to write and email me – twice weekly – a journal of thoughts and opinions: on anything at all. It can be as little as 4 sentences or as long as you like, but writing is a muscle: the more you flex it, the better it gets!

TEXTBOOK:

Book Title

Author

Publisher

ISBN number

Library Call Number

Never Coming to a Theater Near You

Kenneth Turan

Public Affairs

9781586482312

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

REQUIRED RESERVED READING:

NONE


RECOMMENDED RESERVED READING:

NONE

 

GRADING POLICY
-ASSESSMENT METHODS:

 

Grades are based on:

Attendance (unexcused absences and lateness count against your final grade)

Timely submission of all assignments including a course journal

Quality of work.

            Quality of your class participation

 

Grades will be calculated as follows: 60% is your course and collaborative work (successfully completing assignments and turning them in on time); 30% is your final exam; 10% is your contributions to the class.

 

Late essays or any assignment will mean a 1 point reduction per day. Meaning an A will become an A-minus, etc. Lots of late papers (unless there is a convincing medical excuse -- and by convincing I mean a note from the doctor) can mean C, a D, or an F, depending on how egregious the number of late papers.
Lots of great class participation, on the other hand, can turn a C-student into a B-student. And a B-student into an A-student. So participate! (And join in the fun).

Journalism is a deadline business. Broken computers are no excuse for a late paper


 

Journals

 

A good writer pays attention to the surrounding world and lets nothing go to waste. To heighten your perceptions, you are expected to collect observations, scenes, dialogue, descriptions and ideas – and write a few sentences every night (which you will then email to me) as though it were a diary. While these notes and jottings will reflect your individual style, they must still be expressed in complete sentences and be as fully realized as possible. Strive for creativity, specificity and ways to put the reader at the scene. Your written journals will not be read out loud, but they are necessary, vital even, in order for you to improve your writing.

 

  These entries which you email me must consist of at least 4 lines of notes twice a week (the entry can of course be longer if you wish), Sunday and Monday, by 10 p.m. The entries themselves are ungraded; each entry gets a point, but only if it is handed in on time.

   You will also be doing a lot of short pieces, many of which you will be asked to share with the class (by reading out loud). BRING YOUR LAPTOPS, PLEASE. I am practically the only professor I know who wants laptops in class, but they are very important in journalism. Take lots of notes -- trust me, you'll need them.

 

ASSESSMENT

CRITERIA:
Work must be original, on time (journalism is a strict deadline business), and well thought out. It must also be the creation of the student. Plagiarism would imperil the survival of any magazine, TV program, web site or newspaper, and students who plagiarize will fail the course. This does NOT mean you can’t gather facts and figures from other newspapers and online sites regarding the subject you’re working on. But grabbing quotes without attribution to the source that originally got those quotes (i.e. New York Times, La Stampa, or whatever) – or rewording an entire article and calling it your own IS plagiarism. If Mrs. X talks exclusively to the New York Times and says something so significant you want to quote her as well, you MUST say, as Mrs. X told the New York Times last year, “Blah-blah-blah.”

And one final note:  Expect to have your work shared publicly and to treat your colleagues as you would like to be treated.



ATTENDANCE

REQUIREMENTS:
 

You are expected to attend every class and show up on time. This is not optional. Journalists show up. That’s their main obligation and it’s vital. Follow the syllabus closely and check your emails regularly for any announcements or changes.

 The course may at times vary from the calendar below. Watch your email for possible announcements of changes!!! We may want to take advantage of topical stories or issues or decide to approach some aspect of investigative writing in a different way

Please refer to the university catalog for the attendance and absence policy.

ACADEMIC

HONESTY
As stated in the university catalog, any student who commits an act of academic dishonesty will receive a failing grade on the work in which the dishonesty occurred. In addition, acts of academic dishonesty, irrespective of the weight of the assignment, may result in the student receiving a failing grade in the course. Instances of academic dishonesty will be reported to the Dean of Academic Affairs. A student who is reported twice for academic dishonesty is subject to summary dismissal from the University. In such a case, the Academic Council will then make a recommendation to the President, who will make the final decision.

STUDENTS WITH LEARNING OR OTHER DISABILITIES
John Cabot University does not discriminate on the basis of disability or handicap. Students with approved accommodations must inform their professors at the beginning of the term. Please see the website for the complete policy.


 

SCHEDULE

 

1)      FIRST 2 WEEKS: WHAT YOU CAN AND CANNOT WRITE AND SAY.

 LIBEL LAW,  SLANDER, JOURNALISTIC ETHICS AND COMMON SENSE

We shall review famous cases of  libel and slander suits: the historic case of John Peter Zenger, which eventually gave rise to the First Amendment to the Constitution,  the New York Times vs. Sullivan (the most important  libel law precedent ever, and the precursor to all sorts of additional license granted the media) freedoms ; .writer Mary McCarthy vs. Lillian Hellman; Roman Polanski vs. Vanity Fair magazine (or libel law in the UK – a whole different kettle of fish, and one that can have serious repercussions for any American writer and that writer’s bank account!);  novelist Jeffrey Archer vs. anyone who writes anything about him. Also included is the circumstances in which you shouldn’t ever accept an assignment, no matter how tempting: personal bias, internal knowledge, close friendship, etc.

2)      The modern history of op-ed writers, from longwinded and pompous to crisp, acute and relatively short. Who they are. What they used to say and write. What we now say or write.  Walter Lippmann, James Russell, Maureen Dowd, Nora Ephron.

3)      How women opinion writers revolutionized the field:  their new subjects and their novel way of phrasing: Robin Givhan, Ephron, the late New Yorker film critic Pauline Kael.

4)      Critics, reviewers, how they write, how they think, and what they write about:  food critic Ruth Reichl, film critic Kenneth Turan of the LA Times and National Public Radio, TV critic Tom Shales of the Washington Post, Australian art critic Robert Hughes.

5)      Writing opinions for TV:  how to do it. Classroom explanation. Then writing (no more than 3 minutes long). Then delivery

6)      Punching your copy. What it means in both TV and radio, and how to do it.

7)      In front of the camera: or, the medium is unforgiving, and the message can get lost if you’re not careful. Discarding the inessential: excess language, excess invective, excess everything (jewelry, scarves, facial expressions, hand gestures).  We will examine and critique each student’s copy, delivery, and presentation.

8)      Writing for the Internet: how is it the same? How is it different from newspaper and magazine writing? Cf: Washington Post and NY Times web sites.

9)      How to write for Web aggregate sites: The Huffington Post and the Daily Beast. What makes them successful? What makes them crowded and difficult to navigate? How to write for either or both.

10)    The impertinent and investigative sites: Jezebel, The Smoking Gun, TMZ, TPM Muckraker – how to write for them: different strokes for different folks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

SessionSession FocusReading AssignmentOther AssignmentMeeting Place/Exam Dates
spring, 2012Basic JournalismWriting and Reporting News: A Coaching Method Carole Rich 9780495004233A lot of magazine, Internet and newspaper articles will be handed out